Chapter 15 13. Work around

Modern poetry formats, standard or ideal, 16 types were cited in the previous article.Call it ideal, because actual poetry is often not like this.If it is not like this, it can be made into an article, according to the tradition, and a flexible method can be used.Modifications, those with a shallow level, will be discussed in this article; those with a deep level, that is, the so-called "flexible", will be discussed in the next article.For the shallow ones, from light to heavy, we will talk about four types. One, one or three To compose poetry, it is not easy to fill in Chinese characters according to the standard flat and zigzag format, because a certain Chinese character may be suitable, but the sound may not be suitable.Both meaning and pronunciation can be changed.But sometimes it's not difficult, if you need the tones, you can replace "双" with "两"; "Autumn" song.Difficult, what should I do?One way is to hit it hard.The ancients were not so hard, but took the road of being able to deal with it.The so-called "can be used" refers to non-keywords, that is, single numbers in the front of a sentence.The old saying "one, three, five, no matter" is not sure here, because the situation is not as simple as it is said.The gaps in the old language are mainly two aspects.One is to avoid "Gu Ping", the five-character "Ping Ping Zhe Ping" format, the first key point, the seven-character "Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping" format, the third key point is that the flat tone must be used, and it cannot be changed to If the tones are used, it becomes "Ze Ping Zhe Ping", "Ze Zhe Ping Zhe Ping", it becomes "Gu Ping" (except for the rhyme), which is taboo by poets, and the reason is just that it is not pleasant.On the other hand, the omission is that one, three, and five are treated equally. The fact is that the importance of the sound comes from behind, so five words, three are based on theory, seven words, and five are based on theory (not absolutely allowed); regardless of, for example, such The tone of the song, "Ze Ze Ze Ping Ze", "Ping Ping Ping Ping", "Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping", "Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping", is obviously not pleasant to listen to.

The following is a positive discussion of the flexible situation. The first character of the five characters is flexible (it should be flat and flat, or it should be flat and flat, the same below): format example sentence ·Pingpingpingpingpingpingping·I heard that Huanglong Shu ·Pingpingpingpingpingping·I am doing something special ·Ping Ping Ping Ping ·Pingpingpingpingpingping·When will you come back? format example sentence ·Pingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingping ·Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Xiao Cao

· Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Pingping ·Pingping Pingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingpingping·Mountain Seyao Lian Qin Shuwan's seven words are modified: format example sentence Zeze, Zeping, Zeping (孤平) Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping the battlefield The first and third characters of the seven words of the famous and likable people on the roadside are flexible (also become the remedy for the following discussion): format example sentence ·Ping Ze Ping Ping Ping Ping ·Ping Ping ·Ping Ze Ping Ping ·Chinese·Emperor has a high platform

·Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping ·Nine Heavens ·Chang He Kai Palace ·Pingze ·Pingpingpingpingpingping ·Yunli·Dicheng Shuangfengque is flexible, and there is a change of increasing and decreasing in a sentence.This seems to have little to do with it, but many ancients, probably feeling sorry, liked to use remedial methods to seek symmetry.Remedial methods can be divided into three categories: one is the remedy of the original sentence, the other is the remedy of the paired sentence, and the third is the remedy of both the original sentence and the paired sentence.Examples are as follows: This sentence remedy:

Paraphrase remedy: Both this sentence and the opposite sentence are remedies: 2. The mediocrity of franchise fouls The reason is not clear, it may be to achieve the effect of first slowing down and then rushing or first relaxing and then stretching. In ancient poems, there are many odd-numbered sentences, and the pattern of flat and flat is changed to flat and flat.Such as: There is also a verse that is used twice, such as five words: Baiyu Xiantai is ancient, Danqiu is far away.The mountains and rivers are chaotic and cloudy, and the buildings and pavilions are in the clouds.The crane dances to the thousand-year tree, and the rainbow flies to the Baichi bridge.Also meet · Chi · pine nuts, sit on Tianlu and invite each other. (Chen Ziang's "Climbing Jiuhua Temple in Spring")

Seven words: Chongyang drank the wine in his glass alone, got sick and went to the stage on the river.Bamboo leaves have nothing to do with people, so chrysanthemums do not need to bloom from now on.On the other side, Xuanyuan cries at sunset, and white geese come before the frost in the old country.Where are the brothers and sisters who are depressed?The two phases of fighting and declining. (Du Fu's "Nine Days") It is used repeatedly in a poem to express a preference.When used once, most of them are the second-to-last sentence of the five-jue-five-regulation and the seven-jue and seven-regulation. The reason may be that it is about to end, and I am more willing to add circumflex. (The first sentence of the five-tempered rhyme is also commonly used in this format.)

3. The first sentence uses adjacent rhyme There are strict restrictions on the rhyme of modern poetry, that is, in a poem, the rhyme words must belong to the same rhyme, otherwise the rhyme will be calculated and it will not meet the rhythm.But the first sentence is an exception. You can imitate ancient poetry and use adjacent rhyme (similar in sound, such as Yidong and Erdong, Sizhi and Wuwei, Baqi, etc., which will be discussed later).Such as: Play the oriole, don't teach it to sing on the branches.When I cry, I startle my concubine's dream, and I can't get to the west of Liaoning. (Jin Changxu "Spring Resentment")

This poem rhymes with "Five Musts" and "Eight Qi Rhymes", and the rhyme word "er" in four rhymes is used in the first sentence. During the Qingming Festival, it rains heavily, and passers-by on the road want to die.Where is the restaurant?The shepherd boy pointed to Xinghua Village. (Du Mu "Qingming") This poem Qijue rhymes with thirteen yuan rhymes, and the first rhyme word uses "Fen" in twelve rhymes. In the sound of dogs barking and water, the peach blossoms are thick with dew.You can see deer when the tree is deep, but you don't hear the bell at noon in the stream.The wild bamboo is divided into green mist, and the flying spring is hung with green peaks.No one knows where to go, worrying about leaning on two or three pine trees. (Li Bai's "Interview with Dai Tianshan Taoist and Not Encountered")

This five-rhythm rhyme is in Erdong rhyme, and the first rhyme word uses "Zhong" in Yidong rhyme. The hand wind spreads out the eight-line book, and the eyes are dark to search for the nine-game map.In the window, the sun flies wild horses, and the desk head is in charge of Pulu.To be humble is to secure the snake's feet, and to serve the country's danger, he once stroked the tiger's beard.There may be no tacit knowledge in the whole world, and it is unknown who intends to try Qi Yu. (Han Xie's "An Poverty") In this poem, the rhyme of Qiyu is in the rhyme of Qiyu, and the rhyme of the first sentence uses the word "book" in the rhyme of Liuyu.

Xu Yong's rhyme is liberating, and it will give the author some convenience.However, when the ancients wrote modern poems, it seems that they also had the mentality of binding their feet: one is that they are happy to be restrained, so there are not many people who take advantage of this convenience; Just), there is no generalization, like Lu Xun's "Used to the Long Night for Spring", rhymes with four rhymes (the rhyme characters are Shi, Silk, Flag, Poetry, and Clothes), and the last rhyme word uses five micro The "clothes" of rhyme, the ancients seldom like this.

Four, loss of viscosity Compared with "pair", the sticky rhythm seems to have a looser binding force. If so, it might as well be regarded as a small-scale modification.In the early Tang Dynasty, even in the heyday of the Tang Dynasty, poems sometimes lost their stickiness.Such as: Since the king's departure, I will not return to the residual machine.Si Jun is like a full moon, and every night is less clear. (Zhang Jiuling's "From the Emperor's Departure") The second sentence is flat, and the third sentence is flat. The morning rain in Weicheng clears the dust, and the guests and houses are green and green and the willows are new. ·Admonition·Jun Geng enters a glass of wine, and leaves Yangguan in the west without acquaintance. (Wang Wei's "Send Yuan Er Envoy Anxi") The second sentence is flat, and the third sentence is flat. The Tian family has no neighbors, and sits alone in a spring garden. ·The warbler's cry is not far away from the tree, and the fish play does not startle Lun.The mountains and rivers play the piano, and the wind and flowers drink wine frequently.The years are already Coke, happy to stay. (Lu Zhaolin's "Spring Festival Evening Villa Rate Questions") The second sentence is flat, and the third sentence is flat. I know Song Yubei well in Shaluo, and I am also my teacher when he is elegant and elegant. ·Melancholy·Looking forward to Qianqiu's tears, the depression is different from generation to generation.Jiangshan's former residence is empty of literary algae, and the clouds and rain are barren and the terrace is unimaginable.The most important thing is that the palace of Chu was completely wiped out, and the people in the boat still doubted what they pointed out. (Du Fu's "Five Poems of Ode to Ancient Sites" Part 2) The second sentence is flat, and the third sentence is flat. There is more than one loss of viscosity, such as: Jin Tianfang chilled the killing, and Bai Lu began to specialize. ·Wang Shifei is not happy to fight, and his son Shen Jiabing.The sea air invades the south, and the side wind sweeps Beiping. · Mo · Buy Lulong Sai, which belongs to the name of Invitation Lin Pavilion. (Chen Ziang's "Farewell to Cui's Writings on the Eastern Expedition") The second sentence is flat, the third sentence is flat; the sixth sentence is flat, and the seventh sentence is flat. Taoyuan has always been free from wind and dust, and I visited Yincang at the south of Liushi.Don't dare to ask about birds when you come to the door, why ask the owner when you see the bamboo.The green hills on the city are like a house, and the east house flows into the west neighbor.I have been writing books in closed doors for many years, and all the pine trees I planted are made into old dragon scales. (Wang Wei's "Chun Ri and Pei Di Crossing Xinchangli to Visit Lu Yiren") The second sentence is flat, the third sentence is flat; the sixth sentence is flat, and the seventh sentence is flat.In the early Tang Dynasty, there were more than two times when regulated poems lost their stickiness, but because they were rare, no more examples will be given. Compared with the above three alternatives, this one is not so upright. Most people are strict, and it is still regarded as a violation of the rules, so try to avoid it.Therefore, we imitate, seek stability, or "I follow the crowd", and try our best to avoid it.