Chapter 77 Talking about free verse (2)

Looking at Haizi's poem, although it is full of emotion, it makes me dizzy, has no format, and does not rhyme. Is it a madman talking in sleep, or a great poem? I am confused.But I still have to say that from his poems, I can see his poetic soul.The index finger's poem can be described in two words——hope.His "Believe in the Future" is a representative of hope. I like it very much. Another reason is that its format is very neat and it rhymes to the end, just like me. I also like Bei Dao. People always only advance two sentences in his representative works, but looking at the whole poem, the three elements, words, thoughts and personality are all present.Bei Dao thinks and asks questions, but not Wen Yiduo.In addition, his poems are neat and tidy.Misty poetry is a great revolution in the history of poetry, there is no doubt about it.Things like boats and sky always appear in their poems.Gu Cheng's poems, portraits and paintings are full of colors when you look at them, and they are worth knowing.Other poets have occasional bright spots, but they are not worth mentioning. They are all works with too much color of thinking. What I want to read are poems, not philosophy books.

I am very angry with our Chinese textbooks. From elementary school to middle school, free poems are occasionally selected, but they are all unsightly works. We can't see a new moon in the sky, and we can't feel the haze in our hearts. boring chants.My sadness is that these poems will mislead students, and they will hate poetry even more.The poet selected in the textbook, students probably heard Yu Guangzhong, stretched the sentences as long as noodles, as thin as his body, and words like "over there and here" are not uncommon, and he Other works are more incomprehensible than this "Nostalgia".It seems to be pursuing a rhythm, but it is like driving a car without driving, stopping every time. After "pointing" to other people's poems for a long time, I talked about myself.When I write poetry, it feels like I am playing a game. I am teasing every word, and I am enjoying it, and I can't stop.At the beginning, I may feel a little worried and distressed, but like when I was writing "Fairy Tale Room", I started to get excited in the middle of writing. It is definitely a sweet feeling, but I don't want to be discovered first. The four words of ecstasy It is the most realistic description of my psychology at that time.

Some people say that my poems are melancholy, because the world makes people melancholy.My words are melancholy because I think, and never moan without illness.How do I know that I have the inspiration to write a poem? I will suddenly have an incomplete half sentence pop into my mind unintentionally, and then I will immediately grab that half sentence and work hard to extend it forward, and finally complete the whole poem. I wrote "Dedicated to Me Forever" in the 301 Hospital. It took me a day and a half. I wrote two paragraphs on the first day and left it. I finished it the next morning. In the afternoon, I felt that the meaning was not expressed enough, so I changed the last paragraph. , I am addicted to changing it.As mentioned above, everyone's works are very personal, and I have my own creative ideas, which are reflected in my pen.