Chapter 40 Review of "Dream of Red Mansions" (Part 1)

Baochai talks about illness with Lengxiang pills Aunt Xue entrusts Zhou Rui to send flowers Jin Chuan Zhou Rui smiles fragrant diamond-shaped introduction The book "Red Mansions" gathers the excellent traditions of Chinese characters, including almost all kinds of brushwork in epic poems, lyrics, music and novels. , is extremely beautiful.It is unknown what kind of person will come, Ruoyun is unprecedented and sincere.That is to say, looking back, the few pens and inks always contain deep meaning, which implies that readers are flying away like finishing touches, not just summarizing the facts.The author himself borrowed the book from someone who said it, try to quote his article:

Baochai said with a smile: "The words of the world will be exhausted when they come to Feng girl's mouth. Fortunately, Feng girl can't read and understand, but it's just a joke from the common people. What's more, the narrow mouth of the hairpin, using the method of "Spring and Autumn", Summarize the vulgar words in the market, delete the complex, and add embellishments, for example, one sentence is one sentence..." (Chapter 43) If you want to steal this book as a gift, it is especially relevant when you look back.Knowing that I have a glimpse of a leopard, what I see is very ugly, and I seem to know something, so I also write it down, and chat for the help of my colleagues.Illustrate with examples, whichever is more refreshing.

(1) An example where the entire book does not need to be bound to this chapter The first episode of "Jia Yucun's Wind and Dust Conceives a Lady". This is explained in this book: However, there are people in the boudoir who have their own experience, and they must not be annihilated because of my unworthy self-defense. ... Although I haven't learned, and I have no writing, why not act out a story in false language and village dialect, so as to please people's eyes and ears, so it is called Jia Yucun's courteous lady. (The first round of the new school fat book) Therefore, the purpose of the first chapter is the outline of the whole book. To put it simply, the author uses false language and village dialects to remember his lover and girlfriend back then, and there is no need to stick to the deeds of Zhen Shiyin and Jia Yucun in this chapter.If the original answer is determined, the situation will be inconsistent.Jia Yucun never misses the Twelve Beauties of Jinling, but he only fancyes the charming girl, so he really doesn't care about "feeling", let alone "lady".Moreover, the role of Jiao Xing is fundamentally false, using a homophonic name to imply that being rich is nothing but a fluke.The so-called "accidentally make a mistake, you will become a master", the micro-text ridicule is beyond words.Otherwise, Jiao Xing accidentally became a wife because she looked back at Yucun, which is very good, there is nothing wrong with it.It must be for this reason that this book is written as "Occasionally a Review".

(2) Example of an empty sentence The second chapter is "Mrs. Jia passed away in Yangzhou City, and Leng Zixing gave a speech at Rongguo Mansion". Looking back at the two sentences, one is false and the other is true.The first and second chapters are the general outline of the book.The first time I said that Zhen Shiyin had gone, that is to say, the real thing had disappeared; the second time I remembered Jia Yucun's conversation, that is, the false words of the village, which is nothing more than that.But if you write it like this, there will be only one sentence each time.Moreover, since "Jia Yucun's courteous and pregnant lady" had already seen her before, she had to try to avoid it this time, so Leng Zixing came forward instead.In fact, although Leng Zixing talked about the affairs of the Rongfu, the most important discussion in this chapter, which is the so-called "internal Qi Zhongling" by the ancients, came from Jia Yucun's mouth, which has deep meaning.It's not Yucun's opinion, it's the author's opinion.Otherwise, Yucun has such a thorough understanding of Baoyu's first-class people in this book, but since the third time Yucun came to Beijing and interacted with Rongfu people, only Jia Zheng appreciated him, Yucun didn't know Baoyu, and Baoyu hated Yucun , It seems that the author has forgotten the previous text and failed to take care of it.In fact, Jia Yucun is like a chess piece, and the author is like a chess player, who uses it in one way and in another, and it doesn't matter whether it is inconsistency.

This chapter is only about this matter, and a single sentence cannot be recalled, so I have to accompany it with the sentence "Mrs. Jia passed away in Yangzhou City".Leng Zixing is already in the guest position[9], and Mrs. Lin is especially vain and vain, so this article only has fifteen characters like "unexpectedly, Mrs. Jia, the mother of the female student, died of an illness", which means that Daiyu's funeral is also very special. Simple [10].The pen and ink used in the first and second rounds are completely different from the following ones.Look at the situation of Lin Daiyu written in the third chapter, and you will understand.

The 14th chapter "Lin Ruhai Donates Museum to Yangzhou City" should follow the same example.However, the next sentence "Jia Baoyu's visit to the King of Beijing on the Road" is also embellished with the text, and most of the events of Baoyu's visit to Beijing are seen in the fifteenth chapter, which is slightly different. (3) An example where the first draft can be seen if the text is not secure The seventh chapter is "Sending Palace Flowers Jia Lian and Playing Xifeng". The thirteenth chapter "Qin Keqing's death as a dragon ban captain".

Regarding these two times, I have said before: The one who said Jia Lian played Xifeng is the author's first draft. (Maybe the text is different from the current version, because this is rewritten from "Fengyue Baojian", and the text is quite obscene.) It is also the thirteenth chapter of this work "Qin Keqing's Obscene Funeral in Tianxianglou" The person who said that Zhou Rui lamented Yinglian was the author's revision of the manuscript, just like "Qin Keqing's death and Fenglong banwei" in the thirteen chapters.The language problem is similar, Zhou Rui's wife can't save the text as Zhou Rui, and Qin Keqing's husband donated to Long Jinwei, it seems that it should not be said that Qin Keqing died as Long Jinwei.It can be seen that some chapters are all unfinished drafts, and the author is also in the process of revising them. ("A Study of a Dream of Red Mansions", 200 pages)

Now I mean about the same.Let's talk about the thirteenth chapter first. The strange thing is not that Qin Keqing was named Dragon Forbidden Captain, but that she was never named Dragon Forbidden Captain.Long Jinwei's fifth-rank post, there is a clear text in the book, it should be named Yiren, and the old books are all named as Feng Gongren (the title of "Yiren" was arbitrarily changed by later generations).Gong Ren is a rank three, not in line with Jia Rong's rank five Dragon Forbidden Captain, but in line with Jia Zhen's rank three General Wei Lie, which can be described as strange.It is unimaginable that the author is so confused that he doesn't even have common sense such as three grades of respectful people and five grades of pleasant people.To be clear, "Dead Fenglong Banwei" is facing the shortcomings of the original "Lawful Mourning Tianxiang Tower", which is completely the same thing; but the original book, so it is also clear when looking back; the deleted text has to be changed back to the book. , but from the discrepancy between the review and this article, it slightly hints at its meaning as a dark pen, that's all.In other words, even though the author canceled the matter of "Tianxiang Tower of Lascivious Mourning", he did not change his intention.There are a lot of strange pens in this chapter, and for this reason, the predecessors also pointed out a lot, so I won't mention it again.

Looking at "Jia Lian Playing Xifeng" seven times, I think this is an old chapter of "Fengyue Baojian".Although the "Fat Review" says: Ah Feng is a man who doesn't pay attention to the reason of Fengyue. If he writes it directly with a clear pen, it will not only be offensive to Ah Feng's voice, but also there is no good writing to appreciate; if he doesn't write it, it is absolutely impossible; therefore I only know the method in Liu Zang parrot language, and after a little bit of texturing, not only the words are subtle, but also it will not pollute Ah Feng's heroic character.There is nothing wrong with this book.

Yu's collection of Qiu Shizhou's picture of listening to the dark spring in the window of Qiu Shizhou, his thoughts and pens and inks are unparalleled. Now that I see this biography of Ah Feng, I feel that the painting skills are too bad. But that may have been a rewrite of progress.Imagine the original text of the seventh and thirteenth chapters, the pornographic description is revealed, which is a bit similar.Later, the article "Tianxianglou" was deleted, but it was pointed out by "style of brushwork"; the first chapter of Xifeng Xifeng used "dark spring" (this way of writing is of course better, as Zhiping said).The title of the thirteenth chapter has been changed, but the seventh chapter has not been changed. The author also wanted to change it, and wanted to change it a little darker, and even made a word that is not very smooth like "Zhou Ruitan Yinglian". From this, we can guess author's mood.As a result, it has not been changed, but fortunately, there is no serious problem, and it has been left until now.

According to the current version, "Sending Palace Flowers" and "Xi Xifeng" are coincidental and have nothing to do with each other, but it is hard to say whether there is a big difference in the original.It's a pity that the old text of "Fengyue Baojian" is no longer visible.The above words are based on a lot of conjecture, but they are just for "talking aid". Zhou Rui sends palace flowers to all sisters (4) Examples of mutual names The twelfth chapter "Jia Tianxiang is illuminating Fengyuejian". The 30th chapter "Chun Ling's Painting of Qiang Chi and Outsiders". (Zhigeng version) One person's name, or see this article, or see back.For example, Jia Rui is always referred to as Jia Rui in this article, and there is no text about Jia Rui's word Tianxiang, but there is a sentence "Jia Tianxiang is taking the wind and the moon" in the back.It seems that there is no need to mention this so-called intertextuality, but it may cause ridiculous misunderstandings. For example, Lingguan is only called Lingguan in the book, and there is no other name. If there is an original copy, it is written as "Lingguan Huaqiang", which is not bad at all.But the others are not like this: Chun Ling Painting Rose (Zhi Gengchen's version, Jiachen's version) Chun Ling Painting Rose (Cheng Jia, B version) Cheng Ben also combined a word for age. The Geng and Jin books are called "Chunling", if it has nothing to do with the name Lingguan, why is her name Chunling also called Lingguan?Maybe there was such a thing at the beginning, so the author followed the notes and appeared in this article and the chapter.If Qi's original version is passed down as "Lingguan", it is self-righteous, but it must be known that the old version is not like this, and it is not wrong to write "Chun Ling" or "Chun Ling".Doubting the original "Chun Ling", Cheng and Gao rewrote a word. This name is similar to "Jia Tianxiang" once, but everyone seemed to like it that time and didn't think there was a problem, but this time the name of the senior officer became a joke.For example, "Dream of Red Mansions Suo Yin" starts from the allusion "eight thousand years are a toon", and suspects the age official. Although she is a little girl in the book, she is actually an old man, alluding to Fan Chengmo in the early Qing Dynasty.Because he was imprisoned by Geng Fan, he painted and painted on the walls of the prison and wrote large articles.Although this is a famous story, it can be said to be fanciful and paranoid if it is so kneaded. (5) Contrary to this article, an example of express intention Chapter 15 "Sister Wang Feng dominates Tiekan Temple, Qin Jingqing Dequ Mantou Nunnery". Looking back, it is said that Sister Wang Feng exercised power in Tiekan Temple, and Qin Jingqing was in Mantou Temple, the location is no longer clear.But this is not the case in this article. Mantou Temple and Tiekan Temple are two places. It is clearly stated: This Mantou Temple is Shuiyue Temple...not far from Tiekan Temple. Sister Feng colluded with nun Jingxu to gain power, and she got three thousand taels of bribes in Mantou Nunnery, and had nothing to do with Tiekan Temple. The book narrates it very clearly.Looking back, how do you say she took power in Tieshan Temple?Regarding this point, I think the predecessors have already said it very thoroughly, so I don’t need to say more. Here is a summary of the 15 chapters of "Jin Yu Yuan": Sister Feng took power, and she took Zhang and Li's lawsuit because of her emptiness. It was a matter of Mantou Temple.As everyone knows, Mantou Temple is Tiekan Temple.When writing about Fengjie who plays power, everyone who is Fengjie will be given steamed buns.If you write about Tiekan Temple, all those who will be sent to Tiekan Temple for a big funeral will also be sent steamed buns.Why do you have to exercise power when you come to steamed buns?Or when it comes to steamed buns, where do you get more power?What's more, the iron threshold limits people. The meaning is very good, the text may be a little lacking.The article can only say that "Sister Wang Feng has power over Tiekan Temple", but it must not say that she has power over Mantou Temple.Although playing power Mantouan is in line with the facts, it is greatly unreasonable in meaning.Does a person still "play power" when he is in Tumantou?If you ask if you can "get fun" in the Mantou Nunnery, then you have to ask Qin Zhong.Although the iron threshold and steamed buns indicate that they are two places, they only represent one concept, that is, "even if there is an iron threshold for thousands of years, there must be a local steamed bun."To quote the sixty-third chapter: "He (Miaoyu) often said that there are no good poems among the ancients since the Han, Jin, Five Dynasties, Tang and Song Dynasties, only two good poems, saying, 'Even if there is a thousand-year-old iron threshold, there must be an earthen bun', so he calls himself a person outside the threshold "... Baoyu was like enlightened when he heard this, and with a beep, Fang laughed and said, "It's strange that our family temple is said to be Tiekan Temple, so there is such a saying." It has been made clear that this is one of the main ideas of this book.Therefore, looking back at each other is not only intentional, but also has deep meaning.He deliberately sold a loophole to let us know and feel.Those who are greedy for money and accept bribes, do evil, and harm others may turn around and repent.In fact, I'm afraid it may not be possible, but the author has done his best to make a point of pain for the world. This time, there is another feature in this article, which may be mentioned as a side note, that is, the use of imaginary pens.From Mantou Temple, a famous Shuiyue Temple, said that this is nothing more than flowers in the mirror and the moon in the water.Since it’s called Shuiyue, it doesn’t matter where it is, and it doesn’t matter whether it’s one, two, or three. .”) It doesn’t matter whether it fits or not, it’s all like a dream.The author is sometimes very cunning and will lie in a daze.As Ben said: It turns out that this Mantou Temple is Shuiyue Temple, and because of the good steamed buns made in his temple, it was given this nickname. According to the book, Mantou Nunnery got its name because the nuns make steamed buns well. May I ask the author, is this really the case, or is it a lie to us?I think he might smile. The book "Red Mansion" has a lot of fictions, readers should not be dumbfounded, here is just one example. (6) Inappropriate cases where future generations return to the catalog to be revised The 17th and 18th rounds are "Grand View Garden Examination Questions are correct, Rongguo Mansion returns to the province to celebrate the Lantern Festival". This example shows that the review is not easy to do, and the author is sometimes embarrassed. If you teach us to do it, it will definitely mess up. As mentioned above, although the Zhizhi Geng edition is not divided into chapters, there is nothing wrong with this catalogue.After all the copies were returned, the catalog to be revised was never properly posted.It can be seen that returning to the goal is indeed a bit difficult to do.On page 82 of "A Study of a Dream of Red Mansions", I mentioned the difference between the two volumes of Qi (that is, Youzheng) and Gao (that is, Cheng). The seventeenth chapter of Qi Ben's chapter is shorter than the higher one, and ends with Bi Baoyu's withdrawal from the garden tour, so the chapter only says "Yihong Yuan lost its way and explored the twists and turns".As for Daiyu's purse-cutting, Qi Ben moved it to the eighteenth.The seventeenth chapter of Gaoben, from the moment he invites Miaoyu, concerns the return of Yuanchun to the province, so the chapter says "Rongguo Mansion returns to the province to celebrate the Lantern Festival".The reason why these two chapters are different is because of the different chapters.If we want to criticize the pros and cons of the review, it is more appropriate to criticize the pros and cons of the review.Gao Qi's two originals are divided into I think Qi is better. Although Qi Ben is slightly better than Gao Ben, it's really a bit of a difference.Let me first quote chapters 17 and 18 of the two volumes below: The 17th round of the Grand View Garden Examination is correct, and the Rongguo Mansion returns to the province to celebrate the Lantern Festival (High) Daguanyuan test questions are correct, Yihongyuan lost its way and explores twists and turns (Qi) Chapter Eighteen During the Lantern Festival, when Jia Yuanchun returned to the province, he helped his lover Lin (11) give the seventeenth and eighteenth rounds to the seventeenth round, and made another one in the eighteenth round, such as Gao Ben. (2) Disassemble the two sentences of the combined catalog, give the first sentence to the seventeenth chapter, and change the second sentence slightly (Jia Yuanchun returns to the province to celebrate the Lantern Festival, that is, Rongguo Mansion returns to the province to celebrate the Lantern Festival) to the eighteenth Back, such as Qi Ben.Although the reform method seems to be different, it has committed the same problem: repetition.It goes without saying that Gao Ben repeats at a glance; although Qi Ben literally does not see each other again, in fact he also reappears.They lost their way in Yihong Courtyard, which is part of the big garden.Moreover, Baoyu also inscribed the plaque of "Red Fragrance and Green Jade" after he arrived in Yihong Courtyard. Isn't this "the correct plaque is only obtained after the Grand View Garden examination"?In addition, the two books have the same problem, that is, the title of Daguanyuan is in the 18th chapter, and the 17th chapter first published the catalog; the 17th chapter of Qi’s catalog has one more Yihongyuan, which is also in the 18th chapter. It was only after Huihui that the name was decided; although this has nothing to do with it, it is still a small mistake.In a word, it is not appropriate. Could it be that Qi and Gao's sophomore books were not corrected?This is not always the case.There was a basic difficulty in the division of this section of the book, and I even guessed that the author felt this at the time, so until his death, there was no separation in these two rounds (Geng Chen was two years before Cao Xueqin died).From the 17th to the 18th chapters, there are only two things in this big article: (1) the plaques in various places in the Baoyu Inscription Garden, and (2) the return of the Lantern Festival and Yuanchun to the province.So the original sixteen words: "The test in the Grand View Garden is correct, and the Rongguo Mansion returns to the province to celebrate the Lantern Festival" is true and true.If it is divided into two chapters, the seventeenth chapter will have the first sentence, and the eighteenth chapter will have the next sentence, and it is not very good to go out of the Grand View Garden in the seventeenth chapter.Every time there is only one sentence, it must be accompanied by a sentence.It is accompanied by a sentence, that is, it is full of problems, and if it is not repeated, it is trivial.For example, Qi Ben's seventeenth chapter "Lost in Yihong Courtyard and Exploring the Twists and Twists", which also repeats trivial diseases, Ruo Yadong's "Suspicion and Burdened Qi Cuts the Purse" for the first time, feels that it hurts trivialities.This section of the book is too heavy in terms of weight. It should have been divided into two chapters, but in fact it is only one chapter.Our future school editions are still planned to be collected from Zhigeng, not only can the authenticity of the original manuscripts be preserved, but also the catalogs of each edition are not good, and we are at a loss as to what to do.If it is easy to come up with words, Xueqin has already divided the chapters and written the chapters.The author is still in a dilemma, how can you and I do it.