Chapter 15 Comment on ""Small" Supply and Marketing Station"

As a work written by beginners, the short story ""Little" Supply and Marketing Station"① is commendable. The central character in this story is Peizhu, a salesperson at a small village supply and marketing station, who is affectionately called "the man with beads" by the young people in the village.She understands the party's rural commercial policy, and firmly remembers the words of the commune's finance and trade secretary: "Everything should be for the convenience of the masses", so she refused the care of the brigade secretary, saying, "It's inconvenient at work! The road is long! It’s not easy to go..." She insisted on setting up her small supply and marketing station in the lonely hut at the head of Houshan Village, surrounded by big banyan trees, because there is a place where "members of each village must pass through when entering the mountains and going to the fields." It; the big banyan tree is the place where people rest after work."She insisted: "The hut is good! Go to someone to help me clean it, and it will open tomorrow." The story unfolded from here.

In this short story, the description of the environment and the portrayal of the characters are very vivid and vivid.The saleswoman Peizhu is a girl who loves the masses, loves labor, and loves her work. She is industrious, cheerful, and talkative, which sets off the production team leader Bu Youming, who is not talkative but knows what to do, and who works hard. He is the brigade The young man sent by the secretary to help her clean the hut.Although he didn't talk much, but ① ""Small" Supply and Marketing Station" was published in the third edition of "Ta Kung Pao" on June 23, 1962, the author Cui Yizhong. ——The author's description of his cleaning, dusting and house arrangement in the novel shows that he is a careful and thoughtful person at work.Although he didn't talk much, his concern for the supply and marketing station, his help and even his love for Peizhu were revealed from the actions and words of another group of young people headed by Liu Shusheng.

This method of handling is very clean and neat. The overall atmosphere of this short story is a happy and bright scene of socialist rural construction: there are difficulties, work is busy, and there are contradictions in it, for example, spring is coming, spring plowing is busy, farm tools, coir raincoats, etc. They are rushing to supply; and because the location of the supply and marketing station is convenient, it is convenient for farmers to deliver mountain products. The mountain products harvested in the winter even fill up the beds of the huts of the supply and marketing station; the rainy season in the mountains is coming, in order to avoid the attack of moisture, The mountain goods must be sent to the town supply and marketing cooperative as soon as possible.

At this time, Peizhu could not do anything alone, fearing that the delivery of mountain goods would delay the business.When she was frowning, Bu Youming came to teach her: "Discuss the matter with everyone." As a result, 20 young farmers took advantage of the Qingming holiday to help her send all the mountain goods to the township supply and marketing cooperative go.The description in this paragraph is very powerful, depicting the spirit of solidarity and mutual assistance of energetic and labor-loving young people and girls.I think that if after the two sentences "I saw Peizhu with two braids, walking at the front", add a sentence or two describing the long geese-like formation of these twenty young people carrying burdens. If the team walks briskly, maybe the ending will be stronger.

The fifth paragraph describes some details. The kindness and ability of Peizhu are brought out from the conversations of the masses in the field. A few people have misunderstandings, but most people understand it in their hearts. feelings between.This is also well written, but the text could be more concise. In our new society, there are new things everywhere, especially in the countryside, with new construction, new measures, new difficulties and new contradictions.These are all good materials written by the author.Those who are new to writing can grasp these moving scenes to observe, study and analyze carefully while participating in the people's fiery struggle, and write a lot, which is a training and improvement for themselves, and also beneficial for the people.I have great hopes for writers who are beginning to write.

In Beijing on June 13, 1962. (This article was originally published in Ta Kung Pao on June 23, 1962.)