Chapter 152 silent surge

——Reading "Crater of the Moon" by Li Tianfang and Xiaolei I finished reading "Crater of the Moon" within four days. I feel that the author has grasped the three flavors of novel creation through this novel, and even grasped it to an almost pure level. It is almost impossible to talk about this work specifically, but you can feel a silent surge everywhere, which is the skill.The antelope hangs horns, and there is no trace to look for. Does it belong to this state?What the author expresses is the overall experience of life, rather than telling stories. There are sparks of thought and torrents of emotions everywhere, so you are touched everywhere.Ordinary readers want to read stories, stories with twists and turns, but high-level readers are never satisfied with listening to stories, but want to read life.A novel with a complete story and all its boring aspects, after reading a book like "Crater of the Moon", I am willing to read it forever.This kind of novel is difficult to skip and read, and you can only enjoy every word, because the author's unique and true feelings are permeated everywhere in the work, which has an irresistible traction for readers.

Some novels seem to have very attractive stories, but they always make people suspicious: Is life like this?is it possible?The author can only be accepted and felt by people if he puts himself in the shoes and makes people credible.Good novels seem to be "nothing", but in fact they are full of insights into life.Every sentence in every paragraph must be written well, not just writing correctly, it’s not enough to take care of the master back and forth, but in every paragraph, even in a few short sentences, there should be eye-catching Bright things must have rich layers and rich scenery in a small vortex of language and in the bay of paragraphs.As long as each paragraph is written well, it is more attractive than deliberately pursuing a complete story.This time, the language of Tianfang's prose and Xiaolei's poetry has completely transformed into the language of novels in the true sense.There should be prose and poetry, but in novels, both prose and poetry should become prose and poetry in novels, and become the real language of novels.It is precisely because of this that this novel is different from other novels.Some novels pursue the explosive effect of news reports, but this is a work that pursues artistic effects.A novel cannot be impacted by events.This novel obviously tries to use art to conquer conquerors, so I read it with particular interest.It is really impossible to talk about it, but it has been written in more than 300,000 words.It is not easy to achieve this point.Before I read the latter part, I was imagining it. After I finished reading the latter part, I found that it was exactly in line with what I had imagined.Everything is natural.Only huge and ingenious labor can produce works that do not show traces of processing.

Some people may regard this kind of novel as just a language, and this kind of understanding is superficial.The most important thing is a deep experience and feeling.This book made me feel a kind of sincerity in content, and this sincerity has been expressed in a powerful way.Some novels lack the sincerity of life and are just written for writing; some novels have sincerity, but they cannot be achieved through the taste of art, especially language.And this work combines the two as much as possible.The most important thing is the deep feeling and understanding of life, and then the expression of language. The combination of the two can form a novel in the true sense.This is where the real value of this novel lies.Although the description is calm, the heart is full of storms.This is a truly broad world that draws readers into the depths of their hearts.The human spiritual world is a boundless palace.The writer's experience cannot be replaced by anyone, and readers follow the experience provided by the writer to think.As a result, the novel seems particularly bland in its external structure, but has real inner tension.

A notable feature of "The Crater of the Moon" is the excavation of the human spiritual world, which pursues another pattern of vastness.And different, one focuses on the description of social history, and the other focuses on the excavation of spiritual history, but it cannot be said which one is bigger and more important than which one.In fact, the world of the mind is the largest.The hearts of Rochester and Jane Eyre lead to the whole world.I have read it many times, and this kind of novel is very charming.Shallow book critics tend to pay attention to all kinds of gimmicks in appearance.Don't pull in irrelevant things in order to expand the capacity. "The Crater of the Moon" is not like this, there is no description that diverges from emotion.From the perspective of writing a novel, I read and analyzed the chapters and paragraphs of this novel, and finally think that it can only be written in this way.It is rare to get excess, and it is rare to have less.It can only be like this.I think novels should be like this, which should be vivid and restrained.It's a pity if it's not too hot; it's also a pity that it's too hot.Art is harmony, and propriety is harmony.Insufficient or superfluous destroys harmony.

The broadness of the novel means that the writer's perspective on life should be open; just telling the story to the north, south, east, and west is not necessarily open.And this novel is open in terms of the way of thinking and revealing the psychology of the characters.In the past, the author's prose, novel or poetry works were full of restraint, but this time he was able to let go, and he became more and more let go later.What is important is that the grasp of the life, thoughts, ways of thinking, ways of expressing emotions, life forms, etc. of that era is accurate.These are written accurately, and reading novels makes people enter and even immerse themselves in that era, which makes us have such a thought: no matter how naive we were, that era is still wonderful and fascinating.

In fact, using art to tamper with life and history is a kind of real childishness.The novel's descriptions of various characters at that time, especially those who are rigid or bad today, are all restrained. The author judges and reviews from the perspective of society. Identifying characters from personal likes and dislikes is a kind of historical overlook.It is not easy to make a particularly clear impression of the group of people described. "Moscow is clearly visible in your pen", this is the highest praise for the work.The characters and environment described in a work leave a particularly clear impression on people, which is the least and also the most difficult.

The ending of the novel is also good, and the last paragraph is particularly good. Only in that era, this kind of ending has a profound poetic flavor and gives people a particularly warm and moving feeling.But I feel that at the end of the novel, Zhou Wei and Wei Cunxian's pen and ink are a little lighter in response to the fate of several characters.I think it would be better to have a little bit of historical or philosophical summary of the people and life I was with, and a bit of writing about "Crater of the Moon" at some point near the end, for example in the description of the wedding In the above, it can be said: those who have come, those who have not come, those who are alive, and those who have died. In the eyes of later generations, the lives of these people are simple, ordinary, and even mediocre. However, in such an era background Under the circumstances, they have made unremitting efforts and lofty pursuits... Such a summary may give people more inspiration.There should be a small paragraph and a small detail. Click on it. Although there is now, it is not enough. The title of Lu Zhe's death and the cave wedding should be more ingenious.There must be a heavy pen, no matter in thought or content, a heavy pen is needed to let the surging things have a home.Of course, the consistent style of the whole book is required.Also, the mid-autumn festival protagonist's meeting with old classmates is a little blunt.Although this is a small flaw, a few dissonant interludes in a symphony will ruin the whole symphony, so we must pay attention to it.

Generally speaking, there is no slack or reluctance in this novel, and there is a kind of ease everywhere.This is obviously a reflection of decades of artistic accumulation.The accumulation of decades is displayed on a suitable big stage. It can be seen that the author has used all the original prose and poetry skills, but it is far different from the previous prose and poetry works. .From an artistic point of view, this work should be viewed objectively. This is undoubtedly a major achievement in the creation of Shaanxi novels, and it is a high-quality full-length masterpiece. Through this novel, the author should pursue the victory.Art should be factual about distinguishing what is valuable from what is not.This book is a total jewel of value.For the time being, the author regards all previous works as preparations for this book, without thinking about anything, and must complete the following things.My experience is, don't think about anything, just write what you want to write.I believe that the author will be able to write well.