Chapter 12 Section 12 Refinement

Now I have discovered a difficult problem in writing, which is the painful choice between point and surface.Although millions of soldiers look the same to you, if you enter their inner world, you will find that it is a very thick book.Miao Lian, for example, can write a best-selling novel, Chen Pai's story is also very typical, and Lao Pao, if this kind of stuff falls into the hands of Liu Zhenyun and Yan Lianke, it will be good to expose some farmers The inferior and powerful novella, the works of these two predecessors whom I respect very much, and "Empty Mountain" are all shocking masterpieces I have read.

In other words, there are many characters, many clues, and many stories, like a cat facing a room full of mice, not knowing which one to bite first.I have met hundreds of people before and after in the army, and everyone has their own personality, and they are all worth writing about.I just sat in front of the computer and froze for a long time. I didn't know whether to stay on the point, or to hurry up and show the main characters before entering the story.It seems that the literary theory class is not good enough, which is really a big problem. That's why I said that the current military-themed TV series are not doing well. It's not the fault of life. If you stay in a hotel, you can't figure out what's going on with the grassroots troops, what's going on with the real professional soldiers--I'm not worried about the editors. Stories, but too many stories, I can only blame myself for not writing before, now I have a look when the shelves are laid out, shit!The shelf of a novel can only be described as a simple outline, not detailed yet.

I have already skipped the situation of the group army's reconnaissance business competition. I don't know if careful readers have noticed?It was also a process with many characters and many stories, but I really didn't have the guts to spread the shelf so big.I'm not writing a 40-episode TV series, but I want to show everyone the real military feeling of Chinese soldiers, so I quickly stop, because now I have other writing tasks at hand. This is how to do? Of course I have to finish writing this. It is not difficult to write 2,000 words a day even after starting work, but it is really difficult to finish writing this way. I can’t finish writing in a year.

Therefore, I can only reluctantly give up and discard a lot of things, such as the description of "Green Mountains and Canyons" in the last chapter, and enter the promotion and development of some character stories. Ugh-- We are called up at 5 o'clock every day, and we have to go to training before our eyes are opened.Of course, I first came to a 10,000-meter armed off-road to appetize, and then quickly took a few sips of breakfast. Sometimes I grabbed the fried dough sticks with eggs in my pocket and jumped into the back of the truck. Later, this was not the case, because the training is very scientific. was gradually increased.I have always hated the staff who drew up the plan, it makes you feel very uncomfortable, but you just can’t go down, and you are always swaying at the critical point of the limit—whatever you really do, but it’s our brothers who suffer; When we got in the car, we threw our guns aside and lay down on our backs, and we didn't distinguish between soldiers and officers. Although I was the only private, I could still fall asleep no matter how bumpy I was. ——It's really tiring.

As soon as I got off the car, I started today's training subjects, sometimes shooting, sometimes rock climbing, sometimes blasting, and sometimes something messy - there are countless training subjects for scouts, not soldiers who don't have enough brains It can be done-do you think that special forces are as simple as Lao Mei in the movie, opening the door with a gun and shouting "Clear"?What I said was just a small example!So at that time, I always encouraged those scouts from the countryside who participated in the training camp to study hard and go to the military academy, or after returning home, I would take extra tuition to take the college entrance examination. One of my passions in the army was to encourage everyone to go to the college entrance examination, but there was always no one. I was able to pass the exam because I couldn’t sit still because of my wild temper, or my family was too poor to take the exam and went to work as a migrant worker.Alas - I failed so many good brains!

Armed swimming is the subject I fear most.There is a small island in the middle of the lake, which is out of reach in my eyes. I forgot the exact number of kilometers. It has been too long.If we were to swim over with bullets and grenades and turn the jug full of water, I would have liked to load the bullets first and stun the major who said this rule—unfortunately, the ammunition was empty.For me, it was difficult to swim empty-handed in the past, let alone carrying so many iron guys on my back?But you still have to jump in the water when you order it, and it’s not like you don’t wear anything. There is still a swimming ring tied around your waist with a rope, but it’s very small. The Dafei who came to rescue you - is the Dafei used for smuggling in Hong Kong in the movie.Depend on!It would be better if he served as a guarantee than no guarantee. Every time he came over, the huge waves would make all the brothers drink a few sips of water. He couldn’t find the north for a long time, so he stepped on the water quickly to avoid being drowned—that’s why I said the rubber shoes of our army are very cute and very Cute, don't look at him as inconspicuous, you all hate him, but when you swim, you just take it off and tie it to your belt, and it's very fast to put it on - the past is not over, there are still subjects!What about a pair of big cowhide boots?Can you still wear it?It’s okay if the rubber shoes are wet, they will dry in a while, but if the military boots are wet, it’s really troublesome, your feet will soak in it! ——Military boots are a good thing. It depends on where they are used. Of course I use military boots for street fighting. They are convenient for kicking doors and fighting. I also use them in desert terrain because the sand is too hot. But why should I use them when swimming in mountains and jungles? he? !Looking for death? !

It was very strenuous for me to swim at the beginning, and now we started to play tricks—Chen has good drainage, he grew up by the Yangtze River, and has seen a lot of strong winds and waves.Every time I set off, I would grab his belt under the water - of course I also swam myself, but I didn't know what to do at first!Chen Pai is such a good buddy, it made me so excited that I had to write a love letter for him every day when I was tired - of course, he played a flashlight for me to drive away mosquitoes.Later, I gradually became less afraid, so I didn't need him to take me with me.If you have a good physical foundation and overcome your fear, there is actually nothing you cannot do.And I gradually discovered that the joy of swimming is the comfort after overcoming the limit, the same feeling as running - recalling it is really full of emotions, what is "taking pain for joy" is called taking pain for joy!Everyone is scolding the Chinese army for this and that, but do you know what they do every day?The happiness at that time was so simple - alas!

After overcoming swimming, other subjects are not too difficult.I won't go into details. Our training camp was coming to an end, and when the assessment officially started, I discovered a secret of Chen Pai. Chen Pai and I lived in a tent. There were 7 brothers in the tent, and Miao Lian and a company commander from another company lived in a two-person type.The army is a strictly hierarchical place. At first I had an opinion on this point, and then I didn’t. I got used to it. At that time, the training was very tiring, and I didn't want to wash up after the roll call and put it down quickly-but it can't be done, comrades!There is also political study, and sometimes we have to show condolences to the movie-we didn’t scold the Chinese moviemakers to death at the time, how dare we sell the army if the bad movie can’t be sold? !I shudder when I recall the badness of the film! ——Just don’t let you idle, the army is the most unbearable.Watching movies is not a relaxation for us, but a more terrible torture than training-this is a very serious mental torture!It's getting far away again - what I want to express is that as long as the lights are turned off, the snoring sounds will keep coming and going within 10 seconds.Everyone's sleep quality is absolutely good, unlike the insomnia I have every night now.

Ugh-- It was the last day of our training camp, and everyone had a little relaxation and dinner at night.I ate too much braised pork. I had to wake up at night for the first time. In my dream, I heard someone moaning. It was very painful. I thought it was a nightmare.I couldn't hold it anymore, so I opened my eyes and got up with a flashlight and toilet paper to get out of the mosquito net. As a result, the moaning stopped all of a sudden. I really thought I was dreaming and was about to go to the toilet.As a result, I heard teeth grinding again, apparently unbearable teeth grinding.And heavy snorting.I started to look for it, and finally found that the sound was coming from Chen Pai's mosquito net, so I went there, and the movement stopped suddenly.

I felt strange, so I picked up the flashlight and turned it on. I could see the fuzzy row inside the mosquito net with eyes open, and the heavy breathing that was trying to be suppressed couldn't be ignored. I whispered: "Chen Pai?" Did not answer me. But I saw that Chen Pai still had his eyes open. I lifted the mosquito net: "Chen Pai?" All of a sudden I was dumbfounded. I saw Chen Pai gritting his teeth and grabbing his right knee, his face contorted in pain, beads of sweat dripping down. "Chen Pai, what's wrong with you?" I turned pale and left, "I'll call you a doctor!"

Chen Pai gritted his teeth and squeezed out: "Come back to me!" I just came back and looked at him, terrified.I hadn't celebrated my 18th birthday at that time, and I hadn't seen anything bigger in the world. Chen Pai gritted his teeth: "I'll be fine in a while. You go back to sleep." How dare I leave, just look at him so stupidly.My stomach stopped being noisy all of a sudden, I was really afraid that something might happen to my platoon leader!The feeling of wanting to hurt him for him - the corners of his eyes began to get wet again. After a while, Chen really gradually calmed down: "I'm fine, you go to bed." I'm not going back. Chen Pai reluctantly wanted to sit up, so I quickly helped him up. Chen Pai smiled: "Am I not well? You go back to sleep." I was like, "No, what's the matter with you?" Chen Pai kept saying that he was fine, but I just didn't believe it. If he didn't tell me, I would call the doctor.In the end, Chen Pai was exhausted by me, so I got up and put on my coat and said, let's talk about it, I am also active. I followed him out. He walked very painfully, I helped him, but was thrown away by him. We went out, the sentinel on duty yelled the password, the flashlight followed, and he didn't say anything when he saw that it was a second lieutenant. We sat down to smoke in a corner of the camp, and Chen Pai didn't speak for a long time. I didn't dare to ask, so I just smoked with him. For a long time at the end, he asked me: "Do you keep it a secret?" I said keep it secret. It took him a long time before he said, "I'm sick. I found out when I visited the house last time." What disease do I ask? He thought about it and said, "Xiao Zhuang, you are not an ordinary soldier, I think you can understand me." I was anxious, and asked what was the disease? Finally, he sighed—I will never forget his sigh, the despair, the sadness, the—unspeakable, heartbreaking feeling. Chen Pai finally said: "Johnson's spondylitis." I still don't get it, don't know what it means. Chen Pai smiled wryly. Obviously, he told me that he was hiding a deep secret. He got up: "Go, stop talking, go back to sleep." I just went back with him, still muttering in my heart, what is Johnson's spondylitis?All I know is that the old scout problem is arthritis, but what is spondylitis, or is it J&J? If I knew at that time, I would have quickly called Miao Lian, I would! Please trust me! As I write this, tears are falling on my keyboard, I have to wipe my keyboard and my tears. I lit another cigarette as I resumed writing. By the way, Chen Pai's special skill is to kick four feet in a row after flying into the air, which is the performance of scouts kicking jars that you often see on TV.There are many people who can do this kind of performance, but I have never seen anyone who kicks four feet in a row. At that time, we all joked that Chen Pai was "Foshan Shadowless Foot". ——Tears are flowing, I can only wait.Feel sorry.